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vm.8: corrections, other changes #513

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Fix formatting.

Change 'set' to 'see' in one place.

In at least one place, a subcommand was described as such. In other places, subcommands were not (were described as commands); aim to be consistent.

This phrase was wrongly formatted:

> and configure a guest to use it by setting

A wrong word in this phrase: 

> Please set config.sample

A subcommand was described as such, various other subcommands were described as commands (not as subcommands).
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grahamperrin commented May 18, 2023

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grahamperrin commented May 18, 2023

Under https://man.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=vm&sektion=8&manpath=freebsd-ports#GUEST_CONFIGURATION_FORMAT (using the freebsd-ports approach):

session from the 'iscsictl(8) -L' command output, and

The linked page does not exist.

https://man.freebsd.org/cgi/man.cgi?query=iscsictl&sektion=8&manpath=freebsd-release does exist. There should be a method of referring to the required page that does not break when the referring page uses freebsd-ports.


Breakage aside: the phrase can be improved, to not imply that (8) is (verbatim) part of a command.

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