diff --git a/xep-0045.xml b/xep-0045.xml
index bf7448a8..e92b824c 100644
--- a/xep-0045.xml
+++ b/xep-0045.xml
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
   &stpeter;
   <revision>
     <version>1.34.7</version>
-    <date>2024-07-11</date>
+    <date>2024-07-12</date>
     <initials>gk</initials>
     <remark>
       <ul>
@@ -57,6 +57,7 @@
         <li>Status code purpose no longer hints that recipient is the affected user</li>
         <li>Improved 'Service Removes Non-Member' example.</li>
         <li>Clarify usage of presence stanzas when removing a non-member from a members-only room.</li>
+        <li>Replace inappropriate RFC 2119 key word usage in §9.7.</li>
       </ul>
     </remark>
   </revision>
@@ -3634,7 +3635,7 @@
   </section2>
 
   <section2 topic='Revoking Moderator Status' anchor='revokemod'>
-    <p>An admin might want to revoke a user's moderator status. An admin MAY revoke moderator status only from a user whose affiliation is "member" or "none" (i.e., not from an owner or admin). The status is revoked by changing the user's role to "participant":</p>
+    <p>An admin might want to revoke a user's moderator status. An admin is allowed to revoke moderator status only from a user whose affiliation is "member" or "none" (i.e., not from an owner or admin). The status is revoked by changing the user's role to "participant":</p>
     <example caption='Admin Revokes Moderator Status'><![CDATA[
 <iq from='crone1@shakespeare.lit/desktop'
     id='mod2'