From 5be6c0b838181ade53ba1ad198e12e9fd3c09ab9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Drew Paine <pained@lbl.gov>
Date: Fri, 12 Jan 2024 12:27:19 -0600
Subject: [PATCH] Content tweaks

---
 content/planning-framework/overview.mdx |  8 ++++----
 content/planning-framework/typology.mdx | 10 +++++-----
 2 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/planning-framework/overview.mdx b/content/planning-framework/overview.mdx
index 8c6715b..10c6b03 100644
--- a/content/planning-framework/overview.mdx
+++ b/content/planning-framework/overview.mdx
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ import { ContentCard } from '/src/components/ContentCard';
 import { Link } from 'gatsby';
 
 <Hero>
-  The STRUDEL Planning Framework will help scientific teams incorporate UX practices in their software production.
+  STRUDEL Planning Framework will help scientific software teams incorporate UX practices development work.
 
   ## The STRUDEL Planning Framework
 
@@ -19,14 +19,14 @@ import { Link } from 'gatsby';
       <ContentCard>
         #### Surfaces key questions
 
-        Surfaces key questions to consider when planning & designing new software products or features
+        Surfaces key questions to consider when planning and designing new software products or features
       </ContentCard>
     </Grid>
     <Grid item md={4}>
       <ContentCard>
         #### Foregrounds sociotechnical matters
 
-        Consider organizational, social, & technical topics affecting team work
+        Consider organizational, social, and technical topics affecting team work
       </ContentCard>
     </Grid>
     <Grid item md={4}>
@@ -42,6 +42,6 @@ import { Link } from 'gatsby';
 <PageContainer>
 # More information is coming soon!
 
-Understand the background by reviewing our initial <Link to="/planning-framework/typology">typology</Link>.
+Understand the background and motivation by reviewing our initial <Link to="/planning-framework/typology">typology</Link>.
 
 </PageContainer>
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/content/planning-framework/typology.mdx b/content/planning-framework/typology.mdx
index 87a45fd..d3394cd 100644
--- a/content/planning-framework/typology.mdx
+++ b/content/planning-framework/typology.mdx
@@ -8,17 +8,17 @@ import { PageContainer } from '/src/components/PageContainer';
 <PageContainer>
 
 ## Note: Active Research
-The STRUDEL Typology here is in an initial form and subject to continued research.
+**This is an initial verison of the STRUDEL Typology and subject to continued research.**
 
 ## Overview
 The STRUDEL Typology is a conceptual tool for categorizing elements of scientific projects building and using software products. The typology helps identify and compare common activities in scientific work that should be considered when focusing on requirements, user experience, software sustainability, and so on for software. The focus on software production and use, especially its UX and sustainability, is a key distinction and bias of the STRUDEL Typology. Three interconnected elements shape this typology:
 
-- <em>Organizational issues</em> – The bounding, bedrock contexts shaping work at hand
-- <em>Social concerns</em> — The dynamics of people arranged into teams doing work
-- <em>Technical matters</em> — The details shaping software product(s) & affecting a user’s experience
+- *Organizational issues* – The bounding, bedrock contexts shaping work at hand
+- *Social concerns* — The dynamics of people arranged into teams doing work
+- *Technical matters* — The details shaping software product(s) and affecting a user’s experience
 
 ### Motivation
-The STRUDEL Typology enables a user to systematically analyze & compare diverse scientific projects. This analysis helps surface commonalities that impact user experiences & sustainability of the software being produced and used.
+The STRUDEL Typology enables a user to systematically analyze and compare diverse scientific projects. This analysis helps surface commonalities that impact user experiences and sustainability of the software being produced and used.
 
 ### Application
 The STRUDEL Typology is constructed to be used by individuals engaged in scientific project planning or sofware development who needs help thinking through current or potential challenges in their work.