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COPY: Throughout SITE (grammar, persuasiveness and effectiveness) - Final clean #11

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dsjoerg opened this issue Jun 26, 2016 · 4 comments
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COPY: Throughout SITE (grammar, persuasiveness and effectiveness) - Final clean #11

dsjoerg opened this issue Jun 26, 2016 · 4 comments
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dsjoerg commented Jun 26, 2016

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dsjoerg commented Jul 14, 2016

From @seeyew:

Showed a VC/product friend Hillarybnb.com yesterday, he was impressed and suggested the following texts. Just a suggestion anyway so take it or leave it.

Welcome to Home Sharing for Hillary!
Home Sharing for Hillary is a way for Hillary supporters going to DNC to stay with other supporters.
(Note that we are not affiliated with AirBnb)

Of course the going to part should be changed accordingly. Just a suggestion and thought I should pass along

@NanKrafft NanKrafft changed the title review site text and email text for grammar, persuasiveness and effectiveness COPY: review SITE and EMAIL text for grammar, persuasiveness and effectiveness Oct 10, 2016
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Email Copy should for sure be updated.

Current:

"Hi Nan ,

Thanks for registering with HillaryBNB! Click the URL below to confirm your registration:

HillaryBNB - Confirm Your Email

Legal Disclaimer: By agreeing to use this service, you hereby agree to waive any and all claims arising from your use of this service against the Hillary Clinton campaign, any groups associated with the Hillary Clinton campaign, and DevProgress."

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Doc With copy edits

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cxThVacGKHSMLKl6MX5CpEasXvj613l2f9eOo8MLXJQ/edit?ts=57fbfeff

@NanKrafft NanKrafft changed the title COPY: review SITE and EMAIL text for grammar, persuasiveness and effectiveness COPY: update on HOMEPAGE & throughout SITE (grammar, persuasiveness and effectiveness) Oct 11, 2016
@NanKrafft NanKrafft changed the title COPY: update on HOMEPAGE & throughout SITE (grammar, persuasiveness and effectiveness) COPY: Throughout SITE (grammar, persuasiveness and effectiveness) - Final clean Oct 13, 2016
samuelcole added a commit that referenced this issue Jan 6, 2017
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Merge pull request #11 from samuelcole/styles
534b81d 
styles for womens march
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